The cost – Buddo McPhee

Another brilliant piece from a GUNNAS WRITING MASTERCLASS WRITER

 

twelve years old at calisthenics

Dad picks me up

mum with him

Odd that

No banter or talk in the car

Odder that

 

two men in suites in lounge room

We’re in the kitchen

Mum holding a bottle of coke

‘David’s been killed’

Bottle dropped

 

He wanted David’s car

to get to the Royal Show

see his girlfriend

David hit with a coke bottle

 

Unconscious stuffed in the car

driven to the bush

Left there

dying

 

my early 40s

tradie at the house

name recognition

‘knew your brother what did he expect

ripping someone off

bullet through the head’

 

Not what I remember

 

Need to know mid 40s

Attorney’s Department

Thick file smelly

Court transcript coroner’s report

Carbon copies not easy read

 

photos taken out

Censored

Wrong place wrong time

Senseless

Murdered for gold ‘71 Ford falcon

3 boys 16, 16 and 17 2 wards of the State

 

David not quite 17

came to in the car

Head resting

bleeding on one boy’s lap

Dragged from car

 

Didn’t die from bottle blow

fought for his life

Broken fingers bruised

 

There’s a hole in his skull

Not a bullet

car lever hard hit

left to die they ran and hid

 

Took three days for

David to be found

 

Another few to find the boys

 

Whatever risk

boys removed not kept safe

Cost them us dearly

David

his life

 

name remembered

Facebook search

find him

the boy who killed David

The boy let down

changed lives

 

His name the town

face fills screen

man in his fifties

the boy of 17

murderer

 

sent a message

He replied

‘don’t you have better things to do with your time like spend them with you children or husband if you have them’

 

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